Editing Read the following passage. There is an error in each sentence. Identify and edit it.

Laxmi was reading a story-book sitting of a train. It were very interesting. The story was about an wise man. Just then, an old man came there. He was not able to carry his luggages. He asking Laxmi’s father, “Can you please help me?” He helped the old man.





Your school planned a picnic to a place of cultural importance in your district. Write a conversation between you and your friend about it. You may use the following.

-Place selected for the visit

- Its importance

- Need to visit

How well did I write?

Fill in the boxes using yes/ somewhat/ no.
I was able to explain / describe / narrate well.
The sentences I used were properly connected.
I was able to express my ideas in apt words.
The ideas were arranged in proper sequence.
I used proper punctuation marks.


How well did I edit my work?

Fill in the boxes using yes/ somewhat/ no.
I deleted the excess words.
I corrected the wrong forms of words.
I corrected the punctuation errors.
I added new words wherever necessary.
I corrected the misspelt words.


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