Editing:

Read the following passage. There is an error in each sentence. Identify and edit it.

It were a hot summer day. Many animal of the forest assembled in and near the pond. All of them were relaxing and talk.Just then, a crow came flying and sat to a branch. An rabbit saw it.





Imagine you are Rip Van Winkle and write a narrative what had happened to you 20 years ago.

How well did I write?

Fill in the boxes using yes/ somewhat/ no.
I was able to explain / describe / narrate well.
The sentences I used were properly connected.
I was able to express my ideas in apt words.
The ideas were arranged in proper sequence.
I used proper punctuation marks


How well did I edit my work?

Fill in the boxes using yes/ somewhat/ no.
I deleted the excess words.
I corrected the wrong forms of words.
I corrected the punctuation errors.
I added new words wherever necessary
I corrected the misspelt words.


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